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Takas Story 14 by Savu0211 Takas Story 14 by Savu0211
Re-drawing page 14

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:iconshena12345:
shena12345 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Artist
sorry....I need to say something about your sentence at the last panel

You - Maybe we should going to eat YOU!

Me - Maybe we should eat YOU!

Panel 4: O.O''
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shena12345 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Artist
oh wait,you are a girl or a boy who comes from germany! 
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SilverScarlet99 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
im mildly curious as to weather or not English is your first language because some of the dialogue is a bit awkward and it reminds me of a lot of comics that were badly translated into English.
Its an excellent comic though don't get me wrong, gorgeous artwork and an engaging storyline.  
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Savu0211 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
no english is not my first language. I am german
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:iconsilverscarlet99:
SilverScarlet99 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Cool, i am proud for having guessed it. 
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:iconwaynegirl13:
waynegirl13 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student General Artist
NUUUUU!!!! DUNT EAT TAKA!!! TAKE RIKU INSTEAD *shoves Riku up her mouth*
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:icon101dogscc:
101dogscc Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it okay if i make a base outta this, of the first scar?
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:iconeeveejolteonfan:
eeveejolteonfan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
its says liom not lion :3
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:iconinvader-jad:
Invader-Jad Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
The English is terrible.Sorry,but it really is.
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:icondallaswinstonfan1:
DallasWinstonFan1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
He is from Germany, dear. You astound me with your retardness.
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:iconinvader-jad:
Invader-Jad Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
No,really? I couldn't tell.
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:icondallaswinstonfan1:
DallasWinstonFan1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Well, don't go being mean to people. And I apologize for calling you a retard.
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:iconinvader-jad:
Invader-Jad Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Sorry,but he said before to correct him I think.

My inner grammar Nazi snapped ._.'
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DallasWinstonFan1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Yeah, since of how he's from Germany, he apprieciates (I iz terrible at spelling,lol) it if people correct him. You were only going by what he said.
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:iconmykklaw:
mykklaw Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Territorium? Liom? Needs to be fixed.
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:iconthehorsewithwings:
Thehorsewithwings Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
liom? dont you mean lion?
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:iconember24:
Ember24 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Ah, second panel. It says "You are liom, after all." One, I think there was a typo, and two it is supposed to be "You are a lion, after all."
I dunno, I went back and read these because I love 'em <3 Not sure if you are still getting grammer corrections or what-not.
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:icondesi-shatteredglass:
Desi-ShatteredGlass Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
Lol "Territorium" and "liom"
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:iconfreedomfighter93:
freedomfighter93 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It should say, "What are you doing here?" and "This is our territory."
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:iconsakya-chan:
Sakya-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Instead of 'Maybe we should going to eat YOU!' It should be, 'Maybe we should eat you!' Just a suggestion though. I love the comic <3
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tiff13246 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maybe you are going to eat them!! You are a lion after all.

No lion is suposed to be here! So tell, me what are you doing here? This is our territory!

Maybe we should be eating you!!
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:iconzakflame:
zakflame Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh this cant be good
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:iconalphadestroyer:
Alphadestroyer Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
don don DOOOOON :XD:
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:icondarklinksminion:
Darklinksminion Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
O.o

RUN!!!
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:iconsamrickim:
SamRickim Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Student Photographer
*You're a lion
* That's our territory!
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:icondadona777:
dadona777 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
this is great ^ ^ is Taka Scar??? if so, this is a really nice backstory. TLK probably should have included it :D

however, if I'm going to fav all of this, I'm afraid it's going to take up too much message space :/ so I will fav only the first pages
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Savu0211 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Lol,. thank you very much :hug:
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:icondadona777:
dadona777 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
np :D
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:iconch-ibi-wof-angel:
ch-ibi-wof-angel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Nice
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:iconbeck-a-sketch:
Beck-A-Sketch Featured By Owner May 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Don't you know that lions and hyenas are enemies? Maybe you're going to eat them, hmm? You are a lion afterall. No lion is allowed here. This is our territory!

I-I'm so sorry! I didn't know!

Heheheh! Maybe we should eat you!
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:icondemonfirekirara:
DemonFireKirara Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"You are a lion after all" little typho :D
and
"This is our territory!"
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:iconbrittanychayanne:
BrittanyChayanne Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Lol you had a typo in typo my friend :p
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:icondemonfirekirara:
DemonFireKirara Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh the irony.....
Sorry
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:iconbrittanychayanne:
BrittanyChayanne Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
Lol no problem :3
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:iconashwolf-forever:
AshWolf-Forever Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Professional General Artist
Looking good. :)
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:icongreen-green-fox:
Green-Green-Fox Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010
Who is this?
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Sladin5Ever Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Nice smooth lines now :D No more icky bumps. Used to happen to me so much b/c my hand always shook when I tried inking. The colors are nice now too. Also, the expressions are as amazing as ever

"What are you doing here?"
"Maybe we should eat you"
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Savu0211 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2010
thx :D
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:iconanonymoux:
Anonymoux Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010
Beautiful! I love the lines and the shading!
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:iconthemaggdog:
TheMaggdog Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Student Writer
Ya this is alot better than the first one. U improve so fast :)
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:iconsavu0211:
Savu0211 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010
thank you very much :)
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:iconthemaggdog:
TheMaggdog Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Student Writer
U welcome ^^
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