well honestly I don`t care anymore. If I called them cubs, people came and taught me it`s called hyena pup, if I call them pup other said it called cub - if I look in my dictionary it says both is possible...so...I am out of it XD
tiff13246Featured By OwnerNov 19, 2011Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, wait. Does this have anything to do with the movies? Some lost story-board or something? It's so connected to how Scar turned out, or did you do that on purpose? I love your comics, just like everyone that reads it does, but woah! The story goes perfectly with the movies and wow, i love them!
I'm enjoying the comic, but you really need to read through what you are writing more critically than you are at the moment, some of your sentences make no sense, or at least are grammatically very odd. "at this place the lions make living us" I guess that means "at this place the lions force us to live in" but I'm not entirely sure.
Not yet, not yet! We've still got time, the sun hasn't gone down yet!
Are you still waiting? It's getting late.
Freya, his parents are never coming. Let's just eat him and get it over with.
Don't be stupid, Colt! He's a royal cub! You should be thankful his parents haven't found him yet? Don't you see how useful this cub could be to us? Even though he's not jealous yet of his brother being king, he will be when he grows up. Then he will bring us back to the Pridelands!
"Are you still waiting?" "And it's our luck that his parents don't look after him! Can you imagine what would happen if he became one of us?" hard sentence "Even if he doesn't want to become king now...He will when he grows up." "And then he will take us back to the Prideland. Maybe we have to die in this place the lions made us live in, but my pups won't!"